Eighteenth Draft [Accidental Video] Drunk is more fun

[cuffmeonce]

Nikki leaned across the table, her blouse gaping open just enough to throw the suspect off his game. Only a hint of a smile quirked the corners of her lips before she banished it for the dominatrix attitude that worked so well in the interrogation room. The truth was crawling all over the suspect's skin just waiting to be spoken. Heat could see it there and she knew there would be a moment when he couldn't stand it anymore, when he'd come to her on his knees begging to confess. She pushed herself away from the table with a smirk that clearly said you missed your chance

"You may not want to tell me the truth but you're going to. Sooner or later."

Nikki leaned across the table, her blouse gaping open just enough to throw the suspect off his game. Only a hint of a smile quirked the corners of her lips before she banished it for the dominatrix attitude that worked so well in the interrogation room. The truth was crawling all over the suspect's skin just waiting to be spoken. Heat could see it there and she knew there would be a moment when he couldn't stand it anymore, when he'd come to her on his knees begging to confess. She pushed herself away from the table with a smirk that clearly said you missed your chance

"You may not want to tell me the truth but you're going to. Sooner or later."

Nikki leaned across the table, her blouse gaping open just enough to throw the suspect off his game. Only a hint of a smile quirked the corners of her lips before she banished it for the dominatrix attitude that worked so well in the interrogation room. The truth was crawling all over the suspect's skin just waiting to be spoken. Heat could see it there and she knew there would be a moment when he couldn't stand it anymore, when he'd come to her on his knees begging to confess. She pushed herself away from the table with a smirk that clearly said you missed your chance

"You may not want to tell me the truth but you're going to. Sooner or later."

Nikki leaned across the table, her blouse gaping open just enough to throw the suspect off his game. Only a hint of a smile quirked the corners of her lips before she banished it for the dominatrix attitude that worked so well in the interrogation room. The truth was crawling all over the suspect's skin just waiting to be spoken. Heat could see it there and she knew there would be a moment when he couldn't stand it anymore, when he'd come to her on his knees begging to confess. She pushed herself away from the table with a smirk that clearly said you missed your chance

"You may not want to tell me the truth but you're going to. Sooner or later."

[Castle growls ridiculously then shuts the laptop and pushes away from his desk.]

The same paragraph. Twelve times. I can't write anything else. Nothing wrong with the paragraph but I've got to cut to the chase here. The same paragraph over and over isn't going to cut it.

[That's when he notices the video device is recording. It pulls another growl out of him]

I'm going for a walk.

Comments

Re: audio;

[cuffmeonce.livejournal.com]

This one does too. This is a paragraph near the end. I'm trying to get it ready for a summer release.

Re: audio;

[treadingdawn.livejournal.com]

You mean the ending will be the same scene over and over?

Re: audio;

[cuffmeonce.livejournal.com]

If the City doesn't let up on this curse, possibly.

No. The ending will end with the bad guys getting caught, the good guys saving the day and possibly Nikki Heat and Jameson Rook actually embarking on something that might be a relationship.

Re: audio;

[treadingdawn.livejournal.com]

Oh!

...What a ridiculous curse. I'm sorry you must endure it.

Re: audio;

[cuffmeonce.livejournal.com]

Yeah it is kind of ridiculous. I've been cursed with worse though.

I don't think we've met. I'm Rick Castle.

Re: audio;

[treadingdawn.livejournal.com]

I do think of it as harmless too, except for one's pride.

I am Caspian.

Re: audio;

[cuffmeonce.livejournal.com]

Honestly my pride isn't even harmed. I'm a very humble person [Lies]
It's more frustrating than anything because I'd hoped to get work done.

Pleasure to meet you, Caspian.

Re: audio;

[treadingdawn.livejournal.com]

Then for your sake I hope it isn't a curse that lasts through the night, Rick Castle.

Re: audio;

[cuffmeonce.livejournal.com]

As do I.