cuffmeonce: (Not this again)
Nikki leaned across the table, her blouse gaping open just enough to throw the suspect off his game. Only a hint of a smile quirked the corners of her lips before she banished it for the dominatrix attitude that worked so well in the interrogation room. The truth was crawling all over the suspect's skin just waiting to be spoken. Heat could see it there and she knew there would be a moment when he couldn't stand it anymore, when he'd come to her on his knees begging to confess. She pushed herself away from the table with a smirk that clearly said you missed your chance

"You may not want to tell me the truth but you're going to. Sooner or later."

Nikki leaned across the table, her blouse gaping open just enough to throw the suspect off his game. Only a hint of a smile quirked the corners of her lips before she banished it for the dominatrix attitude that worked so well in the interrogation room. The truth was crawling all over the suspect's skin just waiting to be spoken. Heat could see it there and she knew there would be a moment when he couldn't stand it anymore, when he'd come to her on his knees begging to confess. She pushed herself away from the table with a smirk that clearly said you missed your chance

"You may not want to tell me the truth but you're going to. Sooner or later."

Nikki leaned across the table, her blouse gaping open just enough to throw the suspect off his game. Only a hint of a smile quirked the corners of her lips before she banished it for the dominatrix attitude that worked so well in the interrogation room. The truth was crawling all over the suspect's skin just waiting to be spoken. Heat could see it there and she knew there would be a moment when he couldn't stand it anymore, when he'd come to her on his knees begging to confess. She pushed herself away from the table with a smirk that clearly said you missed your chance

"You may not want to tell me the truth but you're going to. Sooner or later."

Nikki leaned across the table, her blouse gaping open just enough to throw the suspect off his game. Only a hint of a smile quirked the corners of her lips before she banished it for the dominatrix attitude that worked so well in the interrogation room. The truth was crawling all over the suspect's skin just waiting to be spoken. Heat could see it there and she knew there would be a moment when he couldn't stand it anymore, when he'd come to her on his knees begging to confess. She pushed herself away from the table with a smirk that clearly said you missed your chance

"You may not want to tell me the truth but you're going to. Sooner or later."


[Castle growls ridiculously then shuts the laptop and pushes away from his desk.]

The same paragraph. Twelve times. I can't write anything else. Nothing wrong with the paragraph but I've got to cut to the chase here. The same paragraph over and over isn't going to cut it.

[That's when he notices the video device is recording. It pulls another growl out of him]

I'm going for a walk.
Date/Time: 2010-06-03 18:11 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] treadingdawn.livejournal.com
I do not mean to be rude, but most stories have a beginning, middle, and end.
Date/Time: 2010-06-03 18:16 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
This one does too. This is a paragraph near the end. I'm trying to get it ready for a summer release.
Date/Time: 2010-06-03 18:23 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] treadingdawn.livejournal.com
You mean the ending will be the same scene over and over?
Date/Time: 2010-06-03 18:34 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
If the City doesn't let up on this curse, possibly.

No. The ending will end with the bad guys getting caught, the good guys saving the day and possibly Nikki Heat and Jameson Rook actually embarking on something that might be a relationship.
Date/Time: 2010-06-03 18:51 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] treadingdawn.livejournal.com
Oh!

...What a ridiculous curse. I'm sorry you must endure it.
Date/Time: 2010-06-03 19:41 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
Yeah it is kind of ridiculous. I've been cursed with worse though.

I don't think we've met. I'm Rick Castle.
Date/Time: 2010-06-04 01:40 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] treadingdawn.livejournal.com
I do think of it as harmless too, except for one's pride.

I am Caspian.

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Date/Time: 2010-06-03 19:09 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cry-reaper.livejournal.com
I'd offer to meet you, but I'm rather occupied at the moment.
Date/Time: 2010-06-03 19:42 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
Are you forced repeating something?
Date/Time: 2010-06-03 21:07 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cry-reaper.livejournal.com
Yes.
Date/Time: 2010-06-04 03:49 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
Dare I ask what?
Date/Time: 2010-06-04 03:52 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cry-reaper.livejournal.com
I'm washing dishes.
Date/Time: 2010-06-07 00:24 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
Huh. Well it could be worse?

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Date/Time: 2010-06-03 22:21 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] playstheblues.livejournal.com
Oh.
Date/Time: 2010-06-04 03:49 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
Oh?
Date/Time: 2010-06-04 08:46 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] playstheblues.livejournal.com
I'm sure you'll get over your block soon, sir.
Date/Time: 2010-06-07 00:25 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
Likely a curse. At least that's what I'm telling myself. You doing alright, Blue?
Date/Time: 2010-06-07 08:35 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] playstheblues.livejournal.com
As usual, yep.
Date/Time: 2010-06-07 15:33 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
Good to hear. You don't seem the type to let curses get you down and I know you've been helpful to my daughter during more than one curse. Good sort of person to have around.
Date/Time: 2010-06-04 03:51 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] horrible-protag.livejournal.com
Fond of that bit, then? I can see why, it's good. It's got very nice qualities to it.
Date/Time: 2010-06-07 00:24 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
Thanks. I agree but I think the repetition is a curse. At least I hope it is.
Date/Time: 2010-06-07 05:46 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] horrible-protag.livejournal.com
I mean, I'm not much into the dominatrix scene, but I suppose it's a good seller, isn't it!

Yes, hopefully. And knowing this place, it probably is.
Date/Time: 2010-06-07 15:32 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
Well it's not really about dominatrix. It's more of an attitude that Nikki Heat adopts in the interrogating room. And it does sell quite well, yes.

That's my guess. How are you Captain Hammer?
Date/Time: 2010-06-07 22:41 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] horrible-protag.livejournal.com
Ah, I see. And where did you get the name Nikki Heat? It's quite intriguing.

I am doing well, thank you. How are you? Aside from the curse, of course.
Date/Time: 2010-06-09 16:03 (UTC)Posted by: [identity profile] cuffmeonce.livejournal.com
I made it up. It's meant to be. Besides I like the sound of 'Detective Heat'. It's also something you can do a lot with title wise. The first book is Heat Wave the second one is going to be called Naked Heat


Aside from the curse, I'm doing great. Things are finally starting to settle a little in the City for me.

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